Friday, August 28, 2009

The Rabbit:

My furry, white rabbit with long, white ears, furry white hands, short, white feet, small, white tail, short pink bag and long, orange carrot was sitting on the grass. It slept.

Picture and Text by Pamela Glaser after her first lesson Writing Strands Level 2.

Unedited by Tammy Glaser, who is thinking her decision to go without the association method for language arts might be justified.


MasterpieceMom said...

Sweet story!

Stephanie said...

Beautiful job, Pamela!

Anonymous said...

What a great idea - having the student take the picture and write about it! I can really see how this method would be so beneficial to my daughter. Thanks!

Unknown said...

She certainly got those adjectives in as requested, didn't she? Wonderful work, Pamela!

Kathy E.

Margie said...

I love how descriptive she is. Are you working with a consultant?

walking said...

Yes! Amy Cameron in Raleigh is AWESOME!